From
the information and comments that I got from audience feedback, I have made a
few changes to my contents page and my double page spread.
When I asked my target market what they thought of my contents page they said that it was well structured but they thought that I needed to add in some more headings in because there was a bit of a gap on the right hand side of the page. So I have added in ‘events’ and ‘extras’ as new headings. This not only takes way the empty space on my page it also adds in more things for my reader to look at. They are then getting more for their money. On the
contents page I have made the headings and information a little bit smaller so
that I could fit ‘events’ and ‘extras’ in. I have now finally added in the page numbers onto my
contents page, this is so when people look through my magazine they can find
the page that they want to look at.
When I asked my target market what they thought of my double
page spread they said that my article is well written but I needed to check my
spelling before I could be finished. So that is what I did, I have checked the
spelling within the article and I did find a few mistakes but I have corrected
them. There was also the comment that I should make the little
pictures oh Hannah a bit bigger so I have slightly increased them because I think
if I make them any bigger then I won’t be able to fit many on the page.
The whole magazine
The comments that I got for my magazine as a whole were really good. My
target market said that they like that I kept the same colours throughout my
magazine so I have defiantly not changes that part. They also said that my magazine was well laid out and easy to follow,
which is important because if people can’t find or read things in my magazine
then they might not buy it.
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